Review: “Diverse Energies”

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Writing a great short story is difficult. Very often a short story will end up feeling like a novel or novella folded onto itself, so that parts of the story seeming rushed or compressed, while other parts seems stretched out by comparison.  And, I say that meaning it’s still a great short story, the same way a sunflower seed is tasty to eat, but has larger possibilities folded inside it.  Writers sometimes give in to the narrative tension wrapped into the short story form, and refuse to accept that their own work is “good enough” while it still feels bursting with potential.

This is why it’s wise to read other writers’ short stories, to feel the literary goodness and structural tension living peacefully side by side.

So, when I got my  copy of the sci-fi short story anthology Diverse Energies (available in hardcover and ebook), I knew that I would be reviewing the stories both as a reader and as a writer.  And DE turned out to be perfect for this: the stories are pure fun to read while still giving a structure-minded writer plenty of test cases to strategize ways to tweak short story pacing for novella or novel length, for adaptation as a TV series or feature film, or just to massage a different effect from a good short. Continue reading

A Proposal For The Naming And Reference Of Extrasolar Planets

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With the recent explosion in the discovery of extrasolar planets, there has been some discussion about the naming convention astronomers use to identify new worlds, a system that some find confusing.  To be fair, the system is very scientific: each new object discovered is given an alphabetical identifier suffixed to the name of the primary star.  So, the first planet found circling Fulanis (not a real star) would be Fulanis b, the second discovered would be Fulanis c, etc., with Fulanis a being the star itself.

As simple as this system is, however, it’s difficult to appreciate its elegance if you’re not a scientist.  And it doesn’t reflect the way humans normally think of places. Imagine if newly discovered islands had been identified this way, with Atlantic b as the first discovered in the Atlantic, Pacific d as the third discovered in the Pacific, etc.

Not very user-friendly. Continue reading

Good morning, civilization!

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This website is dedicated to saving civilization from itself.

To undoing the wishful thinking of optimistic fallacies enabled by the insulation from consequence that pragmatic thinking and realism provide.

To offer a vision that is not intended to restore civilization to some rosily painted antiquarian utopia, some Good Old Days that never were, but rather to move civilization forward to the next step.

To review, revise, and renew. To look at what we have, recognize its flaws, and ask: “What next?”

The primary arena for any renewal of civilization will be the organization. In modern parlance, this means the office/shop, whether that is in business, government, or other forms of organization like non-profits, homeowners associations, and community support groups.

This is true because civilization itself is a form of organization. Renewal does not call for a New Man, self-created as if by magic as the Renaissance envisioned, but a new organization, a New Government-Office that starts with finding the right people among those who are already here and proceeds by logical steps to face the uncomfortable facts presented by experience, update visions and policies based on those facts, and build new structures to bring us into the future.

We must involve an evidence-based approach to organizational success largely at odds with pop psychology and pop business theory, evolutionary psychology approach to human interaction in place of politics, and full acceptance both of the novelty of strategic organization in human evolutionary experience and its necessity in the present and future of civilization.

We must recognize the reality of human intellectual diversity, and the untapped power that suppressed diversity represents in an age of simplistic egalitarianism. We must recognize the dangers of cognitive biases and the promise of neurotypical variety. If we do all of this, we can not only clean our planet and set off for the stars, but also uncover a basis for human happiness that is not premised on addictive ambitions that doom us to a miserable purgatory on the hedonic treadmill.

Let’s get started!

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Short Review : “The King’s Gambit” by John Maddox Roberts

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A mystery novel set in the Roman Republic? I have to admit, although I love mystery and I love history, I bought this book (from Big Sleep Books in St. Louis) with a bit of hesitation.  I was worried about the author’s ability to balance authenticity and accessibility.

On one hand, too readable a tale and the reality of ancient Rome might get glossed over, and I was in no mood to read a book that bullshitted its way through historical reality.

On the other hand, too much real Rome and the typical reader might get lost; having promised my business partner Johnny Sorello a review, I was reading not only for my own entertainment but also for you guys and gals. I was dubious.  The burden of proof was on the author.

Boy, was I surprised.  And impressed. Continue reading

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Optimizing the DC Metro

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design Being somewhat unimpressed with WMATA’s half-hearted “Rush+” program to improve Metro service, I dusted off my old idea for a Beltway Line.

My take is that much of the crowding downtown is due to Metro riders having no way to go around the downtown hub area.  For example if you live in Silver Spring and want to Metro to Bethesda, just a stone’s throw to the east, you have to go all the way through Chinatown first.  Several proposed updates to the Metro, including the Purple Line and the separated Blue Line, are intended to provide riders alternatives to this in-and-out approach.  Continue reading

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What’s J Been Reading? [Bounty Day, 23 Jan 12]

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I haven’t been posting about everything I read lately.  To be honest, the constant updating was a bit tedious and the feedback lukewarm.

But, every once in a while I find something that is just too good not to pass on.  The short story “What Everyone Remembers” by Rahul Kanakia is one of those stories.

This is a good example of fiction that breaks the “rules of writing” successfully.  For example, the protagonist-narrator is largely passive while the other characters take action around her.  Also, most of the story is dialogue.  Lastly, a lot of the information you need to understand the story is established by telling, not showing.*

Yet, this is a well-written, emotionally engaging story nevertheless.  The language is touching, the character interactions natural despite the strangeness of the main character.  I believe these aspects of story-telling are far more important to literary quality than most of the mechanistic advice we typically read in writing blogs and books.   I encourage writers and readers to take a look!

And, once you’ve read it, take a moment to think about how perfectly the title matches the precise boundaries of the story.

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* This final point might be more a consequence of length than style; if Kanakia were to make a novel of it, he might show more.

Odd Thought on Historical Ignorance

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At some point, one of our grandchildren is going to read the name “Bin Laden” and think: “weighed down by a lot of containers?”

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Odd Thought On Revision

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I want to rewrite O. Henry’s “Gift of the Magi” so that Della decides she can’t part with her hair after all, then abandons Jim because she can’t be with a man who doesn’t own a watch.

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An Epitaph

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Ab-Ráhám wagered God ten worthy souls
Démosthenés and I sought only one
but — though the standard in each survey differed —
all met the same outcome

Category: Poetry

Odd Thought on Prehistoric Technology

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“Yeah, but what’s the point?” – Most common question faced by the guy who first turned a stick into a spear.

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